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Itsy-Bitsy Math Songs

creating math songs to help students remember the steps needed to solve math problems

This lesson was created by Northern Nevada teacher Lisa Baehr while attending the NNWP's
I-Pod's Across the Curriculum Workshop.

This writing prompt inspired by

the Itsy-Bitsy Spider and other familiar songs and nursery rhymes.

Click here to do a Google search for the lyrics.


Teacher Instructions & Lesson Resources :

Pre-step…before sharing the published model: This is a lesson that can be used as a follow-up to learning ANY mathematic procedure. Lisa deisgned this lesson specifically for simplifying exponents, but she invites you to try it with other topics.

To start the lesson, make sure that your students have a clear understanding of the mathematical procedure you are covering. Work through several problems of varying levels prior to starting so that students are thinking about all of the possible things that can happen when applying the procedure to actual problems.


Step one…sharing the published model:    Share several songs from the book Take Me out of the Bathtub by Alan Katz. Have students talk about how the author has placed original ideas in the structure that has been borrowed from familiar songs. Let them know they will be thinking about ideas (procedures) and borrowing organization (song structures) as they prepare to write something original for this assignment.

If your students enjoy Alan Katz's book, they'll probably also enjoy Jon Scieszka's Science Verse. If you have time to share examples from a second book, this is the book to select additional songs from.


Step two…introducing models of writing:  To give them an idea of the writing assignment at hand, in small groups, have your students read and respond to any or all of the student models that come with this lesson.  The groups should certainly talk about the idea development and organization, since these are the focus of the lesson.


Step three…thinking and pre-writing:  Begin by asking students if they remember the itsy bitsy spider song. Says Lisa, "We started this lesson by singing to the Karaoke version that I purchased from iTunes and placed on my I-Pod. Search for Karaoke children’s songs and you can find several choices."

Then ask students to list the steps or rules required to solve the mathematical procedure you are currently studying.

Says Lisa, "For exponents, we came up with 1) multiply the coefficients, 2) add the exponents, etc. I pushed my students for 5 main steps although we did not use them all in the actual song we wrote." If you're doing this lesson with exponents (like Lisa did), you can use this worksheet she designed for that very topic.

The next step is to write the lines to the song as a whole class. To begin, write a problem on the board and work it out step by step, thinking about the steps students would take. Then hum the first line of the itsy bitsy song and try to find words that will convey the first step. Continue this process until you have written all lines of the song. Then sing the song with the students to see if it flows or if there needs to be revisions. Use the following rubric to help make changes to your class song.

Once a class song has been created, use it throughout the unit. You might start and end class by singing it together.

When a new mathematical concept is introduced, have students in small groups create original problem-solving songs to the tunes of different familiar songs and/or nursery rhymes. The interactive buttons on the student instructions page might help them explore different songs and math procedures.

Later--as new concepts are introduced and studied, students might individually create step-by-step songs. Have students share their songs with each other, encouraging one another to revise before finalizing their songs. The tools below will encourage revision.


Step four (revising with specific trait language):   To promote response and revision to students' independently written song drafts, attach WritingFix's Revision and Response Post-Its to your students' drafts.  Make sure the students rank their use of the trait-specific skills on the Post-Its, which means they'll only have one "1" and one "5."   Have them commit to ideas for revision based on their Post-It rankings.  For more ideas on WritingFix's Revision & Response Post-Its, click here.


Step five (editing for conventions):  After students apply their revision ideas to their drafts and re-write neatly, require them to find an editor.   If you've established a "Community of Editors" among your students, have each student exchange his/her paper with multiple peers.  With yellow high-lighters in hand, each peer reads for and highlights suspected errors for just one item from the Editing Post-it.  The "Community of Editors" idea is just one of dozens and dozens of inspiring ideas that is talked about in detail in the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Going Deep with 6 Trait Language Workbook for Teachers.


 

Step six (publishing out loud and on-line):   If your students had fun doing this writing, they might enjoy sharing their original poems whole-class or in small groups.

Interested in publishing student work on-line?  We invite student writers to post final drafts of their original at WritingFix's Community of Student Writers.  This is a safe-to-use blog for students and teachers. No writing is posted until it is approved by the moderator. Contact us at publish@writingfix.com if you have questions about getting your students published.

 

 


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