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Emotions and
Colorful Days

uniquely capturing the emotion-filled days of our lives in short, three-stanza poems

The writing of author Dr. Seuss is currently inspiring student writers to try new techniques with the traits of idea development and word choice.

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Student Sample Being Sought: Early Elementary

WritingFix is currently seeking a K-3rd grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us obtain up to three student samples, along with a digital photo of the students and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Elementary Writing Guide, or you may choose from any of our NNWP publications. Writing written as a class or in student groups is always acceptable.

Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and use "Many Colored Days" in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.


Student Sample: Upper Elementary

Sapphire Days
by Luke, fifth grade poet

On my sapphire day,
I'm brown and mellow,
and I just want to lie on my pillow.

I'm a restless sky blue rainbow.
I mosey where there's mysteries.

As the ruby day fades to dingo,
the summer's ocean turns to sapphire.  
I lie on the peaceful sparkling ocean sand and rest.

(Click here to view and print Luke and two of his classmates' poems.)


Student Sample: Middle School

Colored Days
by Luke, sixth grade poet

On my yellow days I'm filled with joy and excitement.
I leap from the couch and run outside.
I fall asleep under the warm sun.
All is peaceful.

On my black days I'm angry.
I roar with hatred as I thwomp through the doorframe.
Then my day clears up as school ends.
I'm a dog filled with happiness.

On my gray days I'm emotionless.
I wait for something very interesting to happen.
If something does happen, I'm a curious little bug.
If not, I slip back into the gray.


Student Sample Being Sought: High School

WritingFix is currently seeking a 9th-12th grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us obtain up to three student samples, along with a digital photo of the students and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Secondary Writing Guide, or you may choose from any of our NNWP publications.

Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and use "Many Colored Days"in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.

 


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