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If your students write using this prompt, and you want to send us a powerful example, we'll consider publishing it on this page. Help us celebrate one of your student writers while inspiring other writers from around the world who use this prompt. Contact us at publish@writingfix.com if you are interested.


Elementary Student Examples:

The fluffy cloud daydreamed of a soaring eagle.
The shiny star winked at the blooming blossom.
The clear ocean whispered to the spring sun.

by Samantha, fourth grade writer

 

 

 

The river cried when it fell from the cliff.
The ocean yelled when it hit the shore.
The wind whistled loud in the air.

by Troy, fourth grade writer

 

 

 

The cold river thought about a warm spring.
The fierce wind stumbled over the flowers that just
bloomed.
The snowy mountains whispered, "It's not winter anymore."

by Elizabeth, fourth grade writer

 

 

(Click here to view and print these three fourth graders' poems for shaing in class.)


Middle School Student Example:

Orchestrations
The piano argued
As the music grumbled
And the trumpet sighed.
While the guitar whispered,
The drums mumbled.
Then the horn echoed,
And the crowd cheered.

by Sarah A., seventh grader


High School Student Example:

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